The overall essay was well written;however, some of the sentence was babish. In a college level essay your not supposed to tell your audience what your going to write about, they should already know. Also, paragraphs should be 5 sentences minimum.
The overall essay was well written;however, some of the sentence was babish. In a college level essay your not supposed to tell your audience what your going to write about, they should already know. Also, paragraphs should be 5 sentences minimum.